雅思写作中常见的调配疑问
为何许多学生分明词汇量还能够，做阅览听力基本不成疑问，但作文仍然无法进步？笔者以为因素除了观念逻辑方面欠缺以外，怎么做到地道的英语表达也是亟待解决的一个疑问。而在表达傍边，关于词汇的挑选运用则是广阔考生的重视点之一。在这一点上，许多人都抱有这么的过错心态：只需词用得越“巨大上”考官就越喜爱，然后分数就越高。其实不然。咱们总结一下雅思写作评分标准对词汇一项的请求后会发现写作中用词最主要的要抓住两点：有用(effective)和精确(precise)。许多时分，往往你所以为的“高冷”单词，用在某个语境傍边会显得十分不适宜不天然乃至不准确，反而给考官留下了欠好的印象。这即是为何那些形似词汇量很大的考生仍然写不出好的文章。
咱们来看一个比方：
If schools administered with anyteachers, disorder and lawlessness would arise.
这句话中看起来好像用了如划线有些这么的“高端词”，但实则仅仅让全部表达变得十分别扭不天然。咱们修正一下，变为If schools were run without teachers, the behaviorof pupils would be much worse. 能够看到用词难度下降了许多，可是全部语句变得清新天然然后愈加精确有用。所以考生若想进步自身的英语表达就该先端正三观，不要在寻求“难词”这条歧途上继续走下去。
那究竟应当怎么进步写作的用词水平呢？我以为*单词的调配(collocation)才是王道。调配即单词间的天然惯用组合，学好调配能协助咱们更天然精确地去用英语交流写作。比方咱们都知道“重视”叫做pay attention, 假如有人说“give attention”天然他人也能听懂，但这么的表达就十分不天然不地道。再说说上面的比方，“办理校园”最地道的调配表达即是run a school, 假如用administrate就显得十分造作不天然。因此，若想在真实意义上用好自个已知的词汇来进步表达，咱们就应当在平常写作说话中不断堆集英语词汇的调配。在接下来的文章中，笔者会罗列若干比方来演示怎么运用准确的调配来改进你的写作或白话表达。
1. 经常训练能改进大家的身体健康
Often exercise can improve people’s bodyhealth.
Taking exercise regularly can improvepeople’s physical health.
2. 家长和教师应当削减孩子看电视的时刻
Parents and teachers should reducechildren's time of watching TV
Parents and teachers should reducechildren's screen time
3. 处理日子垃圾是当地*的一项主要任务
误：Dealing with living rubbish is an important task for local governments
正：Disposal of household waste is an important task for local governments
4. *应当给出处理环境疑问的解决方法
误：Governments should give a solution to deal with the environmentalproblem.
正：Governments should find a solution to the environmentalproblem.
Find a solution to sth是固定调配，并且没有solution to do这种表达
5. 艺术不是校园的主科
误：Arts is not the core curriculum at school
正：The arts is not among the core subject areas at school
6. 不明朗的经济远景致使了失业率的进步
误：Ambiguous economic future leads to the riseon unemployment
正：Uncertain economic outlook leads to the riseon unemployment
Ambiguous指意义意思的不明确含糊
7. 高昂的费用是大家质疑奥运会承办的一个因素
误：Lavish spending is one of the reasons why people doubthosting Olympic Games.
正：High spending is one of the reasons why people doubthosting Olympic Games.
Lavish指大方或奢华，不好spending或cost调配
8. 空运会产生许多温室气体
误：Air transportation will create many greenhouse gases.
正：Air freight will create many greenhouse gases.
9. 有很大朋友圈的人通常会更快乐
误：People with a large community of friends are morelikely to be happy.
正：People with a large circle of friends are more likelyto be happy.
10. 只犯小罪就遭到严峻的赏罚是不公平的
误：It is unfair to be punished strictly for makinglittle crimes.
正：It is unfair to be punished stiffly for committingminor offences.
11. 如今大家越来越长于运用高科技
误：People have increasingly been good at using hightechnology.
正：People have increasingly been skilled at harnessing hightechnology.
12. 最新的规划正在改动咱们的平时日子。
误：The latest design is changing our daily lives.
正：New cutting-edge design is transforming our daily lives.
13. 撤除那些废弃的大楼能改进城市外观
误：Destroying those abandoned buildings can improve the appearance of the city.
正：Demolishing those derelict buildings can improve city’s image.
14. 开展交通网络能改进路途拥挤疑问
误：Developing transport webs can improve the problemof traffic jam.
正：Developing transport networks can ease the problemof congested roads.
15. 许多疑问影响着贫穷家庭
误：There are many issues affecting poor families.
正：There are many issues affecting low-income/less well-offfamilies
16. *应当给贫穷家庭供给廉价的住房。
误：The government should provide poor families with cheaperhouses.
正：The government should provide low-income/less well-offfamilies with affordable housing.
17. *应当改进贫穷落后地区的日子水平。
误：Government should improve the living standard in poorregions
正：Government should improve the living standard in run-downareas
Run-down意为“条件十分差，十分落后”
18. 采纳严峻的办法来打击犯罪
误：To take strict measures to strike crime
正：To take draconian measures to crack down crime
19. Give some suggestions
Make some suggestions
Give a contribution to
Make a contribution to
20. 用准确的调配来表明“中止或完毕”
中止军事行动 put a halt to military action
中止完毕会议 bring the meeting to a close
制止坏做法 put a stop to bad behavior
终止合同 terminate the contract
中止政策 abandon the policy
21. very的更换词及固定调配
highly educated; highly recommend
strongly influence
greatly appreciate; greatly influence
completely different; completely dependent
deeply offensive
以上是笔者在批改学生写作时发现的有些调配过错疑问以及准确地道调配的演示。
