雅思小作文高分技巧

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导读 下面趴趴教育小编为大家了雅思小作文高分技巧,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。
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在备考雅思写作的时候,很多同学都更加注重大作文,而小作文呢,就很少练习,写得也不熟练。今天小编给大家整理了雅思小作文写作技巧,方便大家运用。

01

了解题目

  想要知道怎么写雅思小作文,就必须先了解图表类型和题目要求。
  总的来说,小作文的图表类型*含以下七类:柱状图、曲线图、饼状图、表格、地图、流程图,还有混合图。
  而题干一般会以这样的形式展现:
  “The chart/bar chart/pie chart/table/graph/diaram/map belows shows...”
  题目要求通常是:
  “Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.”
  从以上要求中可以看出两个基本任务:
  1.概括图表中的主要信息或趋势,以及描述重要数值,并做对比。
  首先要进行选择,在图表内丰富的数据或内容中选择主要的、明显的特征,并对这些特征进行对比。
  2.字数不少于150字。
  字数少于150字会扣分,但字数也不宜过多,建议不要超过180字。因为字数比较少,所以建议大家在20分钟以内完成小作文。
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学习小作文结构

  了解完小作文的基本要求后,接下来要先学习小作文的框架结构。鉴于写作要求的字数和预留的时间有限,同学们要*用清晰的结构精炼地完成小作文图片。
  通常建议同学们用3段写小作文,*括1个开头段和2个主体段。
  一、开头段
  开头段的内容*括改写题干和一个简单的概述。
  1.改写:使用替换表达,用1句话改写题干。
  2.概述:概括图表或数据的主要趋势,并体现出对比;用1-2句话,呈现1-2个特征,不用*含具体数据。
  举个例子,以下小作文题目来自剑桥雅思真题集,范文由新东方在线雅思的写作老师提供图片:
  题目:(C17-T3-T1)
  The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
  范文:
  (改写题干)The bar chart illustrates changes in the amount of money that families in a particular nation spent on eight different categories each week between 1968 and 2018.(概述)Overall,while people allocated much less of their income to food,expenditure on housing and leisure increased significantly.
  同学们可以对比原题干和例句中改写的句子,学习改写题干的方式:
  改写1:gives information—illustrates
  改写2:weekly—each week
  改写3:in 1986 and in 2018—between 1968 and 2018
  改写4:in one country—in a particular nation
  另外,还可以学习例句中的概述句是如何呈现出主要特征,并体现对比。
  特征1:allocated much less of their income to food
  特征2:expenditure on housing and leisure increased significantly
  二、主体段
  小作文主体段描述的内容是具体的主体对象、数值或时间、最小值和*值,以及变化和趋势。此外,流程图需要按顺序描述生产或制作过程等。
  建议同学们根据图表信息的特点将主体段分为两段,可以按主体对象分段,每段内描述一个或几个主体在不同时间的情况;也可以按时间分段,每段内描述同一时间段不同主体对象的情况。你要根据每个题目不同的特点来选择分类方式~
03

学习替换表达

  在熟悉了文章结构之后,同学们还要学习一些替换的词汇和表达方式,增加小作文词汇的丰富程度。下面掌柜给你总结了很多适用于小作文的句型和替换表达,快快收藏起来图片~
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  改写题干
  表示“展示、阐述或反映”:
  illustrate,show,display,reflect
  表达“变化、趋势或不同”:
  change,trend,difference
  表示限定的时间或范围:
  from 1968 to 2018,between 1986 and 2018,during the period from 1968 to 2018
  02
  表达趋势
  上升趋势:
  increase,rise,go up,ascend,soar,surge to,rocket,grow,jump,balloon,mushroom,an increasing/increment/upward trend
  下降趋势:‍‍‍‍‍
  decrease,decline,drop,sink,fall,slide,go down,descend reduce,plummet,a decreasing/downward trend
  维持平稳:
  stay/remain+still/unchanged/constant/stable/steady,level off at,stabilize at,reach a plateau at,remain stable/steady at,hover at
  表示“急剧地;突然地”:
  sharply,steeply,dramatically,drastically,suddenly
  表示“显著地;快速地”:
  considerably,significantly,noticeably,remarkably,rapidly
  表示“稳步地;逐渐地”:
  steadily,moderately,gradually,smoothly
  表示“轻微地;缓慢地”:
  slightly,slowly,mildly,moderately
  03
  表达最值
  到达最高点:
  peak at,reach/hit the peak of,reach/hit the highest point at
  到达最低点:
  reach the bottom at,fall to its lowest point at
  04
  表达流程顺序
  表达“阶段、步骤”的名词:
  stage,step,procedure
  表达流程起初步骤:
  At the first/initial stage,At the beginning,During the initial phase,...is the first step,The process begins with...,Initially
  表达流程中间步骤:
  The second step is...,The next/following step is...,In the next step,Then,After that
  表达流程末尾步骤:
  The last step is...,Entering the final phase...,Eventually,Finally,Lastly
  04
  表达地图中位置和变化
  表达位置:
  be located in,lies in,be sited,be situated,location,position,site
  表达方位:
  in the southwest,to the north,at the top of the hill,by the river,off the road,next to,close to,near,far away from,to the right of
  表达“扩大了”:
  be extended,be enlarged,increase,become larger/wider
  表达“缩小了”:
  be reduced,decline,decrease,become smaller/narrower
  表达“把...连接起来”:
  link,connect,lead to,go to,have access to
  表达“被取代”:
  A is replaced/substituted by B;B is occupying the central area where A stood;A has gone and in its place is B;where A stood there is now B
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