郑州励学：雅思写作是个老大难问题，怎么克服呢

  雅思写作一直都是中国学生的难问题，很多考生常常陷入不知道写什么、不知道怎么写或者是写得出来但是拿不到高分的尴尬局面。对症下药，想要取得高分，就要知道考官想要什么，而我们就要给他们什么。假设考官是老虎，他想要生肉，我们就不能给他们熟肉（因为他绝不会因为肉是熟的比香蕉贵而感激你）。

  考官想要什么呢？首先我们都知道有评分标准：TR、CC、LR、GRA。

  我们今天就来说说*条TR

  (task response扣题)

  如何*不跑题？

  答案很简单：不断重复主题词

  陈独秀同学请坐下！我知道你都懂！

  那边拿板砖的同学也请先放下你手中的武器！

  听我慢慢道来：

  我们先看一个题目：

  Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

  题目中的关键词是

  孩子的年龄

  上学

  好处

  请看下面这篇文章，它的重复重点在哪？

  In many places today,children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.However,because it is more likely now that both parents work,there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age.Instead,they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.

  While some people think this may be damaging to a child’s development,or to a child’s relationship with his or her parents,in fact there are many advantages to having school experience at a young age.

  Firstly,a child will learn to interact with a lot of different people and some children learn to communicate very early because of this.They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations.Such children find their first day at school at the age of six very frightening and this may have a negative effect on how they learn.

  Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially.They make friends and learn how to get on with other children of a similar age.This is often not possible at home because they are the only child,or because their brothers or sisters are older or younger.

  So overall,I believe that,attending school from a young age is good for most children.They still spend plenty of time at home with their parents,so they can benefit from both environments.

  看到了吗？

  表示年龄的词语

  1.at around the age of six or seven

  2.up to that age

  3.when they are much younger

  4.at the age of six

  5.at an early age

  6.of a similar age

  7.are older or younger

  8.from a young age

  表示上学

  1.start primary school

  2.go to a nursery school

  3.having school experience

  4.First day at school

  5.attending school

  表示好处

  1.many advantages

  2.more confident and independent

  3.develop faster socially

  4.is good for

  5.benefit from

  那么结论是

  只有不断的重复主题词汇,才能让考官知道你在说跟题目相关内容啊！否则就很容易跑题.

  避免跑题的办法很简单

  1.在题目中标注出关键词

  2.列出关键词的同义词

  3.利用这些同义词（同根词具化和概化）来展开文章。